Includes correspondence offering feedback from Ron Androla, Robert C. Boyce, George Cairncross, Michael [Cenhard], Nancy Clark, Brian Daldorph, Keith Dodson, Robert Funge, Matt [Gaddes], Christien Gholson, Tony Gloeggler, Lee Giesecke, Robert Grumman, David Howard, Ruth Moon Kempher, Adam C. Kneissler, Norman Kraeft, Ilyse M. Kusnetz, Dan Lenihan, Don MacQueen, Miles David Moore, Todd Moore, Liz Morris, Joyce Odam, Andy Robson, Vanessa Slea, Laurel Speer, and Belinda Subraman.