Includes correspondence offering feedback from Ron Androla, Herb Barrett, Vera Bergstrom, Robert C. Boyce, Jack Brooks, Steven Ford Brown, Bruce Combs, Al Drake, Gabriele Glang, Peter Harley, Tom House, Joan Payne Kincaid, Ben Lomond, Ed Lynskey, Charlie Macdonald, Sheila Martindale, Ann Menebroker, Warren C. Miller, Todd Moore, Dave Morice, Liz Morris, Desmond O'Brien, Ruth Wildes Schuler, Margaret [Scuenders], Steve Sneyd, Laurel Speer, Chuck Taylor, Harold [Witt], Stella Worley, and John Yamrus.