Includes correspondence offering feedback from Anita Stallings Allen, Ron Androla, Vera Bergstrom, Tom Bilicke, Robert C. Boyce, George Cairncross, Janet Carncross Chandler, J. Wesley Clark, Chris Crockett, Michael Cullen, Peter DeFree, Steve Doering, Gerald Dorset, Jay Dougherty, Ken Funsten, Christopher T. George, Andrew T. Gettler, Kirby Gordon, L. P. Harris, Ken J. Harvey, Tom House, David Jaffe, Ave Jeanne, Jean Youell Johnson, Ruth Moon Kempher, Karl Kempton, Joe Keppler, Kit Knight, Ed Lynskey, Sue Marra, Ann Menebroker, Sparling Mills, Todd Moore, S. K. Morgan, Liz Morris, Joyce Odam, Audrey Palmer, Robert Peters, Rhonda C. Poynter, Frederick A. Raborg, Steve Sneyd, Debrie Stevens, Chris Stroffolino, Belinda Subraman, Cheryl Townsend, Harry Turnbull, Seth Wade, Dave Ward, and John Yamrus.