Includes correspondence offering feedback from David Alpaugh, John M. Bennett, Dean Blehert, George Cairncross, Erik Campbell, Peter de Rous, Michael Estabrook, Lee Giesecke, John Grey, Michael Hathaway, Wayne Hogan, Mike Hoy, Ruth Moon Kempher, Charles Kesler, Joan Payne Kincaid, Arthur Knight, Kit Knight, Mike Kriesel, Ed McCafferty, Rochelle Hope Mehr, Ann Menebroker, Louis McKee, Liz Morris, Matthew Petti, Bart Solarczyk, Steve Sneyd, Laurel Speer, T. K. Splake, Maurice Watson, Jr., Lawrence Welsh, Richard West, and William Woolfitt.