Box 1
Contains 18 Results:
Original submitted and returned first-draft script for Amok Time, 1967 March 29
Handwritten notes, "The Root of Evil", probably 1967
Rejection letter addressed to Tad Crawford and signed by John Meredyth Lucas, 1967 November 24
Letterhead: "Star Trek / A Desilu Production / in Association with / Norway Productions / From the Log of the Starship Enterprise." John Meredyth Lucas is identified as "Producer, Star Trek."
Letter sent in response to Tad Crawford's submission of his story idea, "Spirit of the Enterprise."
Memo from Gene Coon to Ted Sturgeon, page by page analysis of the submitted script, 1967 April 10
Story treatment (act descriptions), probably 1967
Treatment for The Root of Evil, probably 1967
Twenty-two page treatment for The Root of Evil. Original pages 5-22, carbon copies of pages 1-21. Page 8 is mis-numbered as page 5 in both original and carbon.
Memo, undated
"From the desk of Martin Shapiro. Ted -- these came back from Gordon Carroll. Love, Carol."
Original TV Guide listing for Amok Time and photocopy of Hollywood Reporter review of Amok Time, 1967 September
"Final" (?) draft of Amok Time, probably 1967
Includes many revisions discussed in prior memos, e.g., the Maggie character is now Nurse Chappel.
Shooting scripts -- "First Draft", 1967 May 15
Copies numbered 49 and 50. The story is advanced beyond revised draft, e.g., McCoy no longer does Scotty impression. Copy 50 has hand-printed note on cover: "Please Return to Theodore Sturgeon c/o G.A.C."
Shooting scripts -- "2nd Rev. Final Draft", 1967 June 5-8
Copies numbered 85 and 86.
Incomplete treatments, probably 1967
Incomplete script drafts, probably 1967
Complete submitted draft (carbon), probably 1967
"First Draft For Star Trek. Theodore Sturgeon ... The Joy Machine"
Memo from Gene Coon to Ted Sturgeon, 1967 July 12
On yellow carbon paper. Heading: Desilu Productions Inc. Inter-Department Communication. CC: Roddenberry, Justman, Fontana. Subject: First Draft "The Joy Machine." Very critical global analysis.
Skeleton revised story line, 1967 July 24
Carbons. "Sturgeon ... The Joy Machine. Skeleton revised story line." Incomplete. Unknown if this was ever sent.